I accidentally saved over my original 500 words but you can understand that it needed a lot of fixing up etc from my peer reviews above. I had only included one academic source as I was struggling to find sources I could fit into my writing.
From here I hope to rewrite the entire thing:
- make sentences shorter and to the point.
- make the overall writing quality better
- include three sources.
- get the structure right.
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